details of a perfect story

details of a perfect story

What makes a good story?

It is not a static endevor to tell a story that is immersive to the listener. There is an underlaying topology -- structure -- that remains constant through each telling (alhtough even this wears over time like rain water on hills), and then there is the path through this topology that changes dramatically to impart the emotion and reason for fragmenting a certain piece of time from the total experience of onese life.

This path has maximums and minimums created by the topology itself, but it undulates and flows, pauses and rushes forwrd, in order to capture in specific dimensions (words, text, visual images, or even cups), the content of the space of the story. The volume that a story fills, because it is in good stories that we find ourselves witness to a new space.

This piece plays on the content and structure of a story. A topology of wood and fans, with a path of air creating dimensionslity in the cups it interacts with; nine simultaneous points speaking to a path across the space.